Some of the weaknesses that were in my rough draft where I kept writing in the first person when this should have been a position paper. Also, my thesis was sorta weak and needed some improvements to make it stronger. Also, I was more nervous to elaborate on my anecdote but it wasn’t as strong as it could have been so I added more detail into it to improve it a lot more. A weak point int the final draft I feel is my bibliography. I had a hard time finding Anne’s citation and I could make one so I came up with one on the spot which is kind of iffy.

I think that overall the peer reviews worked really well. I believe that my groupmates made really great point on my paper that I could improve. I think that the sheet that was given to us before peer reviews really helped out and made this whole revisions process much easier.